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Driving with anger…
Fire in his eyes…
Along darkened roads…
The speeding car flies…
Adrenaline is pumping…
The music is loud…
No traffic in sight…
Far from the crowds…
Taking each corner…
At maximum speed…
Replaying the visions…
Of her dark sinful deed…
She was laid on the bed…
Entwined with another…
Loud orgasmic sounds…
The pillow couldn’t cover…
And he just stood there…
Watched from the door…
He was frozen in horror…
Till he couldn’t take anymore…
Then fleeing the house…
Both hurt and betrayed…
Not really understanding…
Why she had strayed…
His one true love…
He felt such a fool…
Why would she do it…
How could she be so cruel…
The voices kept taunting…
From deep within his mind…
Question after question…
Yet no answers could he find…
So he made the decision…
To get the cold facts…
Decided to head home…
Begin his counter attack…
But as the rain started falling…
He misjudged a sharp bend…
And in one fleeting moment…
The voices came to an end…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
Reblogged this on Experience & embrace.
Thank you for the reblog! Cheers J
Eeeeeeeeek…. 😦
I’ve not killed anyone off for a while – the time was right! Cheers J
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great flow to this, really enjoyed the twist at the end
Really glad to hear that! Thanks for commenting – Cheers J
I can SO relate to this, because, even though I didn’t catch my wife in bed with another man, she moved out – twice – to go live with another man. Yes, there were questions, LOTS of questions, but I ultimately came to the conclusion that this was about HER and not about me. She had used me as a pawn to get whatever it was that she wanted, and when she no longer “needed” me, she moved on.
Blessings!
Steve
Thanks for your insightful comment Steve and sorry to hear your story – Cheers J
Oh crap too bad! I really enjoyed this… Great twist!
Thanks for stopping by to let me know! Cheers J
J, I’ve nominated you for a One Lovely Blog Award. Woo-hoo! Should you choose to accept, here are the guidelines: http://mitchteemley.com/2016/01/29/one-heckuva-lovely-blog/
Thank you Mitch, thats very much appreciated – how about you guest poet for me so I can feature your blog? Email me your words to eyewillnotcry@hotmail.co.uk – Cheers J
great work here!
Thank you Phliot – Cheers J