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On an island far away…
Bathed in the ice white sun…
Sits the seductive angel…
Believing she has won…
That she has got away with it…
And that she is now free…
To carry on with life…
And inflict her misery…
On those who fall victim…
On those she calls prey…
Those who chase distraction…
And from the path, they stray…
Into her waiting arms…
Straight into her traps…
That she has set meticulously…
Ensnaring those who lapse…
As she is the instigator…
The one who turns their head…
Setting the coordinates…
Knowing when they’re dead…
Hell’s cruel fire awaits…
Payment for their sins…
Down a path of no return…
Where only the Devil wins…
Watching good hearts blacken…
As the victims lose control…
In games of truth or dare…
Where the loser gives their soul…
Before accepting her payment…
Of sixty tiny silver coins…
For every sinful blackbird…
Falling from the sky to join…
The ever growing underworld…
She fills with broken wings…
Who endure the state of limbo…
As her twisted scheme wins…
Leaving them to face the Raven…
Who will take their final breath…
As she moves to her next victim…
Luring them to their death…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
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Thanks for the reblog! Cheers J
You’re welcome! I probably should’ve asked first though. I just love the way you worded this!
No need to ask, I take reblogging as a huge compliment, so I appreciate it whenever it is done – Cheers J
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I think you need to guest poet at some point so I can feature your blog? Cheers J
I am considering it. I have had some outstanding numbers at times without doing so but I am thinking of it plus I had 2 people want me to do a podcast:)
beautiful!!
Thank you! Cheers J
most certainly one of my favorites i’ve read here. Good story, and great beat.
why is “Raven” capitalized?
Thank you for your kind words – I stole the concept of the Raven from a recent Doctor Who episode – it was the name of the alien being that killed Clara Oswald – so I wrote it as such – More here – https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Face_the_Raven – Cheers J
Thank you. I actually never got around to watching Doctor Who. I could tell it was significant, but would never figure out why, heh.
You’re welcome! Thanks for taking time to read and comment – Cheers J
Excellent!!! I absolutely love this!
Thanks Dorinda – Glad you liked – Cheers J
Me and my friends already proclaimed this song ‘the stalker song’, but now it becomes even more creepy ^^ Great work, J! 🙂
It really is the stalker song!! Cheers J
I know right!
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