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Flying high…
10,000 feet…
Tired mind…
Slow heartbeat…
Needing sleep…
And recharge…
Numbing senses…
Headache large…
Always pulsing…
Stabbing pain…
Sweating forehead…
Sweeping rain…
Hitting eyes…
High altitude…
Blurring vision…
Darkened mood…
Sickening nausea…
Claustrophobic brain…
Incessant paranoia…
Clinically insane…
Violent thoughts…
Softly spoken…
Constant demons…
Spirit broken…
Forever speaking…
Multi voices…
Never happy…
Criticising choices…
Turning left…
Staying right…
Playing out…
Sinful night…
Never listening…
Didn’t understand…
Never helping…
Withdrawing hand…
Everything fading…
Turning black…
Another wave…
Relentless attacks…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
Such a sad and beautiful poem. But so touching. And I dig the Floyd reference! ;o)
Thank you for your kind words – yeah, love Floyd – I should use them more often! Cheers J
Never helping…
Withdrawing hand…
beautiful…
Thank you Akhila, appreciate you taking the time to comment – Cheers J
Really amazing! I feel like the pace quickens as you read and it provides a frantic and dark mood that accompanies the words.
Thank you Claire – just tried a minmalistic idea – glad it kinda worked! Cheers J
The short sentences make it so catchy! Love it!
Thank you – was experimenting! Cheers J
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