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My time will come,
that much is true…
And I will be judged,
but not by you…
As all my sins,
will be uncovered…
And all my lies,
will be discovered…
And any punishment,
will be handed down…
By a higher force,
wearing a thorny crown…
Not by someone,
with their own agenda…
Whose views on life,
are narrow and slender…
Someone who really,
has never lived at all…
Only sits in judgement,
watching others fall…
Getting pleasure from,
everyone else’s failure…
On the moral high ground,
becoming such a hater…
But your arrows are blunt,
they can no longer hurt me…
I know my failures,
I’m the one who sees…
The bigger picture and
the unedited version…
My whole life experience,
each and every diversion…
Away from the path,
that’s straight and true…
Straying into the shadows,
hiding out of view…
But that’s my problem and
none of your concern…
Worry about yourself and
just leave me to burn…
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Just acknowledging.
All good! Cheers J
This hits hard.
Great work! 🙂
Glad you connected – Cheers J
wow..just wow..
Thank you Saya – I assume that’s a good wow! Cheers J
of course 🙂
Right…. on… the… head.
Perfect.
Thanks Keith, much appreciated! Cheers J
Simply awesome…
Thank you Vishas – Cheers J
wow… what a great mind you have.
My first response earlier wasn’t enough. I Like it and it’s a great way to talk to those sitting in judgement.
Thanks Franz — Cheers J
https://booguloo.wordpress.com/2015/05/24/who-am-i-to-judge-2/ My poem on judgement.
Are you submitting for a guest poet slot? Cheers J
Sure is my judgement poem ok?
A very poignant poem that points blaming fingers back on themselves. Well done.
Thanks Tony – Cheers J
Great Work
Thank you for your kind words – Cheers J
Great work
Thank you! Cheers J
Wow
Wow good? I never like to assume! Cheers J
WOW!