~
Sugar coated lips,
spinning silver lies…
Flashing pure lust,
from honey trap eyes…
Playing her games and
drawing you in…
Truth became dare,
on a night of pure sin…
Speaking in Voodoo,
weaving a spell…
Exploiting your weakness,
she knew you too well…
Never saying anything,
but always just enough…
Designed to be intriguing,
in a simple double bluff…
Trapping your mind and
twisting your thoughts…
Promising maybes,
yet delivering nought…
Leaving you breathless,
full of frustration…
Filling your head with,
thoughts of temptation…
But left you hanging,
feeling like a fool…
Nothing was real,
in her fantasy whirlpool…
And now she’s gone,
without saying goodbye…
Her promises disappear,
on the winds gentle sigh…
As you try so hard,
to get her out of your head…
Remove the images and
words that she said…
Whilst you stand there dazed,
dazzled and confused…
It was fun whilst it lasted,
but you know you were used…
~
Too often too true to deny.
Thanks Keith – the theme is universal I guess! Cheers J
Reblogged this on bears goats and strawberries.
Thanks for the reblog – Cheers J
Yep. Sad. Used, or sorry, it’s not you. It’s the people who come with you I will not have in my life. Goodbye, you will always talk to them. You walk away from someone based on a life you will not live, and unless you were a mass murderer those people would always involve themselves in a life that is not theirs. Sorry, I don’t do “a village”; keep your shit. Missed great sex; but whatever…sex is not destroying the way of life you want and need. Sorry, feel used all you want….but truthfully blame your “friends”.
Wise words! Cheers J
Fell in love with this one xx -CC
Thank you CC and to Alex for the retweet – much appreciated! Cheers J
So true – heartbreaking and spellbinding words. x
Why thank you M’lady – Cheers J
Excellent! and classic Neil once again – superb!
Thanks Mikey – I love this song, in fact all the Neil penned tunes on RAIN are fantastic! Cheers J
Fell in love with this one right to my heart
For all the men she made love her
Tore there hearts apart 😍
Thank you – fancy taking this further and submitting for a guest poet slot? Cheers J
What u mean submitting
Do you want to turn your comment into a poem and email it to me at eyewillnotcry@hotmail.co.uk with your blog details and submit it for a guest poet slot? See my latest post for details – Cheers J
Hmmmm I’m actually making one inspired by your last one
I would love too
Hey love email is bouncing back
Eyewillnotcry@hotmail.co.uk – Cheers J
Have u posted my entry yet 😍😍😁😁😁🙈🙈
Coming up soon – just running behind 😉 Cheers J
Love this!
Am glad – wasn’t sure about this one! Cheers J
Reblogged this on Darque Thoughts.
Thanks again for the reblogs! Cheers J
Fantastic poem!
Thank you Noora – appreciate your kind words – Cheers J
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