~
He kept his eyes wide open…
Every time that they kissed…
To make sure it was real…
And no detail was missed…
Or a single moment…
Of this unbelievable dream…
To remind him that it happened…
And she really was his queen…
Whose shimmering beauty…
Outshone all those around…
He couldn’t believe his luck…
At what he had found…
But this story had two sides…
And there was no escape…
Even if she’d wanted to…
There’s no route she could take…
As she was caught in his web…
And totally under his control…
Between a rock and a stone…
She couldn’t tell a soul…
Who would have believed her…
Her story was just fiction…
A total fantasy mixed with lies…
And an added erotic addiction…
But he knew where it was going…
And was clear what he wants…
Even if, in the midst of it all…
His guilty mind screams and haunts…
And reminded him constantly…
That this was just not right…
She didn’t belong to him…
But his conscience lost the fight…
As she now lies in front of him…
Staring blankly into space…
All hair and perfect make up…
No imperfections on her face…
In her dress, without her heels…
He laid her out on the bed…
Her heart no longer beating…
She now belongs to the dead…
And he’s stood there watching…
Like some twisted voyeur…
Feasting on his evil deed…
And silently hovering over her…
His victim number twelve…
His latest treasure, his prize…
Who now stares back at him…
With dull and lifeless eyes…
He kept her eyes open…
As he strangled her throat…
To make sure she watched…
So he could quietly gloat…
Loving every single moment…
Like he was in some sordid dream…
As he soaked in her final breath…
And her final muffled scream…
~
Eye Will Not Cry 
Haunting… Nice work.
Thank you Antanya – Cheers J
Well done 🙂 Twisted that song…never be the same again…
Thanks Florence, it’s a nice contrast I think! Cheers J
Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
Thank you for the reblog – Cheers J
my pleasure
Beautifully written. STOP IT! 😉
Honestly, after testing the water in a “real poetry forum” and having my style and format ripped apart – you never know, I might 😉 – Cheers J
Always hurts to be criticized for something we create. F-them!
You seem to have a niche that is powerful and appreciated by many.
Thanks for giving me a little taste of “ewhhh!” each day.
Thanks, I try not to take things to heart, but some times the words find a way through the cracks! Cheers J
Scarily, beautifully written
Thank you Michelle – Much appriciated – Cheers J
Creepy, twisted, horrific – WOW! 🙂 ❤
3 more words for your alphabet challenge 😉 – Cheers J
Haha, I’ll note them down! 😉
Will be over to catch up soon – Cheers J
i love the song …beautifully twisted poetry i guess the music got me hooked thanks.
Thanks – glad you liked – Cheers J
Reblogged this on mydailywalk and commented:
my all time favorite glad found it here
very creepy but very well written 🙂
Thank you! Cheers J