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There’s always an exception…
An exception to his rules…
Rules that shouldn’t be broken…
As broken hearts get split in two…
Leaving two hundred million reasons…
Reasons which all got twisted…
Twisted to fit his dark desires…
Desires that just kept on burning…
Burning like stars in the sky…
A sky that was once so peaceful…
So peaceful with sweet dreams…
But dreams kept on recurring…
Recurring with thoughts and themes…
Themes of a forbidden desire…
A desire for the one he couldn’t have…
Have forever as his true love…
A love that could have been so wild…
As wild temptations hung around…
Hung around his crazy life…
A life he lived within his head…
The head that burned beneath the Sun…
A Sun shining darker than before…
Before he broke the rule that said…
Said “do not go where demons tread”…
Tread carefully and please beware…
Beware that this isn’t meant to be…
Be mindful of her playful heart…
A heart not pure but sometimes kind…
The kind of girl who’ll destroy this time…
But time and distance will bring peace…
Peace in his soul that should release…
Release the demons who still taunt…
Taunt him since he broke the rule…
The rule now written in her blood…
Blood that covers both his hands…
Hands that he could not control…
Control his actions and lost a soul…
Soul that will now burn in Hell…
Hell… where rules do not exist…
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Wow! Creepy yet beautiful poem! And the style works so well! – Thanks for the bloody creepy image, by the way. Simply love it, hahaha 😛
Thanks – it’s hard to write this way, but will give another go at somepoint – Cheers J
I can imagine it is. But it’s always nice to challenge your writing skills 🙂 You did great!
Thanks! Cheers J
The American Way of Life?
Perhaps! I hope you are well – Cheers J
Same to you and many thanks! 🙂
Loved this.
Thanks Sara! Cheers J
She always a woman to me!!!!
Indeed – and used that song here: https://eyewillnotcry.wordpress.com/2014/08/02/she-can-kill-with-a-smile-she-can-wound-with-her-eyes-4/ Cheers J
Love that song!!!!
They did so many good ones! Cheers J
Oh yes they did.
Another on its way tonight! Cheers J
“The play’s the thing,” as some Brit once said.
Wise words! Cheers J
Oh this is a really great one! I loved how you used the anadiplosis- the double back, really nice, and the theme was perfect with the song. Definitely a winner!!!! Awesome work. (despite all the blood. . )
I think you secretly like the blood 🙂 – Cheers J
Hey, watch it now!
Keep the soul burning in that dying art form.
Music is spot on.
Visual is just right for the mood.
Inspires me to up my game.
Thank you.
Thank you for your kind words – Cheers J
I love that bloodies face and hand, having a smoke…. yes. I am creepy. (I enjoyed the poem too).
I am creepy too – you are welcome here 🙂 – thanks for your kind words – Cheers J
Very intense… 😎 Regards Aquileana : D
Thank you , glad you enjoyed – Cheers J
Phew! Good Phew!
I think you enjoyed Aditi! 🙂 Cheers J
Hi eyewillnotcry1973. Great song. Thank you so much for liking my poem Reported! Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
Thank you and you are welcome – Cheers J