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Are you reading him…
Loud, true and clear…
Can you feel him…
All of his fears…
All of his thoughts…
Once hidden away…
Can you hear them…
Now clear as day…
Through holes in time…
Between stars in space…
Projecting it out…
His total disgrace…
He’s opening up…
And letting you in…
It’s what you wanted…
Take it, you win…
Just have it all…
All of his thoughts…
His deep dark secrets…
The battles he’s fought…
And the scars he carries…
Feel them with your fingers…
In between the cracks…
Where his pain still lingers…
And now you have it…
What the fuck can you do…
You still can’t help him…
That much is true…
You’ve cracked the nut…
Gained your satisfaction…
But his life won’t change…
There’s no chain reaction…
He carries on as normal…
You never really could help…
The mental wounds are his…
The memories are Hell…
But you got what you wanted…
Now please, just leave…
It’s time for you to go…
He needs space to breathe…
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Powerful poem with a clear message! Well done, J! 🙂
Thank you – love this song! Cheers J
Stunning! I love it and I agree a very powerful poem J 😊❤️
Thank you May – Cheers J
Just curiosity, or a misplaced desire to help?
Perhaps both Keith? Cheers J
Wow! I also agree, powerful and intense
Thanks DG – nice to see you back around – Cheers J
Dark side of the moon.
Certainly is! Cheers J
Tschuss (cheers auf Deutsch)
I googled it 😄Cheers J
hahaha, great lol
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Thanks and done – Cheers J
I agree with the other comments. Powerful and extremely clear message.
Many thanks Liz – Cheers J
Yes…you understand emotion and you can transpire it on a page in poetic form in raw truth like no on else dear J….brilliant and raw -Cheers, Chanel
Thank you Chanel – really appreicate your words – Cheers J
I really enjoyed the way this fragments in thoughts until it carries some final breath. Very beautiful.
Thank you Nathan – Cheers J
Love this!!
Well done.