“She’s taken my heart but she doesn’t know what she’s done”…

walking

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He missed her so much,
more than he could ever say…

But she remained hidden,
until his dying day…

All of the thoughts and
the perfect memories…

The times they’d shared,
he simply had to bury…

Those stolen moments and
her distracting smiles…

Flashes of excitement and
her individual cool style…

They were all in his mind,
constantly floating around…

He tried to lock them away,
but they still made a sound…

Forcing him to smile,
when all alone and sad…

Remembering the laughs and
the fun that they had…

Whilst replaying the nights,
always dreaming of the past…

The visions of her body,
with beauty unsurpassed…

Her perfect smiling face and
her imperfect tangled hair…

Her haunting soulful eyes,
that matching underwear…

It was so long ago,
but felt like yesterday…

He froze her in his mind and
she never aged a day…

But his time on Earth is ending,
the Angels have started calling…

Allowing him to relive the past,
forbidden lust and falling…

Into her sinful arms,
without any guilty feelings…

As she was his one regret,
who’d left his cold heart reeling…

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32 responses to ““She’s taken my heart but she doesn’t know what she’s done”…

  1. I felt your pain. Been there and done that. But through pray I have found myself doing baby steps and a year later God has blessed me with the pain being gone and me knowing that God is the one that made that decision that the person was just not what God wanted for me and that I deserved better. So I never put off 2day what I have to do tomorrow. Stay Blessed my new friend. 🙂

  2. Reblogged this on djsmooth14 and commented:
    I felt your pain. Been there and done that. But through pray I have found myself doing baby steps and a year later God has blessed me with the pain being gone and me knowing that God is the one that made that decision that the person was just not what God wanted for me and that I deserved better. So I never put off 2day what I have to do tomorrow. Stay Blessed my new friend.:)

  3. If this wasnt so danged painful, i could actually love this read.

    So sorry that you hurt but be assured that you are blessed to carry the beauty of memories which will give you comfort in your dying heart…at least that is MY wish for you.

  4. A very poignant and heart-rending piece. Even at my age I can recall a love like that, and the ache is still there, perhaps a little duller. Thanks for the recollections.

  5. very very beautiful! sometimes love does not gets answered just because one never asks for it! 😦

    You know it is better to tell someone how you feel if you truly love that person and then if it is not reciprocated just move on. been there done that without least regret. it is better to get rejected then get tormented by the “hope” of a thing that you will never get!

  6. Thank you all for sharing. It is great to know that we can all bring some type of comfort or sense to what also goes on in our lives. We must all join together and always be there 4 each other knowing that we will all go through something but we are never alone. By us surviving the horrible ordeals that we deal with in life that we can have comfort in knowing that the pain will go away and leave us alone to heal and learn. Life just 2 short for us not 2 at least try to move on and enjoy with someone more deserving of us. Stay Blessed and again thank you sooooo much from my heart for your responses. 🙂

  7. I love this song. Who could forget “Baby”? My mom would fall asleep watching “Dirty Dancing” almost every night. You might think that’s a bad thing, but that was because it’s one of her favorites. She also curses at the television. 🙂

  8. I love everything you create J. This song and that movie, well I have a love hate kinda feeling with them. The reason of course is I just love the guy it makes me think about and hate that it’s more of the same with him just like we were kids. The last message I recieved from him was “thank you for your kind words”. And no it wasn’t from a blog comment. I was reading your responses and all together as I slowly loose my mind it all seems funny.

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