Blujaybynight came up with this brilliant poem for the Poetry Challenge
Check out more over on : http://theoddlu.wordpress.com/2014/11/11/unchanging/
Cheers
J
he is once worn
and twice shed
she brings him out of the cabinet
on special occasions
like fine china
but he never breaks
he is just what she needs
never takes more
than she will give
she threads his needle
in the dark night
punches right through him
and leaves before the
stitches have healed
he sews his fragile heart
to his shirtsleeves
hers for the taking
but she will wrap it up
in her white apathy
and watch it bleed away
Eye Will Not Cry 
A twist on what we always hear. And the song is perfect.
Indeed it is – thanks for stopping by to comment – Cheers J
A twist on what we always hear. And the song is perfect.
wonderful
Thanks for stopping by to comment Caro – Cheers J
Yw!
Beautiful…brilliantly written…took my breath away, amazing poem. Paired with Damien Rice spectacular. Well done! -alex
Totally agree Alex! Cheers J
Thanks for the responses.
Reblogged this on Where It All Went Horribly Right and commented:
Thanks EyeWillNotCry for including me.
You are very welcome – Cheers J
Beautiful poem!
Wow just wow
Wow, fabulous!
Worked really well didn’t it! Cheers J