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She was good company…
For a very short while…
With her devilish looks…
And her demonic smile…
She was the only one…
That he ever let in…
She was so dangerous…
And laced with pure sin…
She was so alluring…
With an undeniable spark…
Encouraging rendezvous…
And secrets in the dark…
But all good things…
Must one day end…
And when she left…
He began to descend…
Now he sits solitary…
All his dreams destroyed…
Searching for something…
To fill the dark void…
Counting the bright stars…
High in the night sky…
Feeling so insignificant…
Always questioning why…
Looking for the answer…
Where no answer exists…
Between the Moon’s glow…
And the edge of the abyss…
Remembering the time…
She lit up his soul…
The moments of madness…
That they both stole…
But the heat of the moment…
Became the tears of regret…
Filled with a sadness…
That is hard to forget…
Leaving him rebuilding…
The walls she broke down…
Now he sits all alone…
Like a forgotten circus clown…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
Thanks for sharing this.
It is beautiful.
You are welcome and thank you for your kind words – Cheers J
just wow.!
Wow good I hope 🙂 – Cheers J
For sure good.!! More like wow great.!! 🙂
Incredible words and imagery… love this!
Thank you Florence – Cheers J
Wow it’s beautiful but sad. I love the flow of your writing.
Thank you for your kind comment – really apprieciate your words – Cheers J
No worries 😀
Lovely poem.
Many thanks for stopping by to read and comment Penny – Cheers J
So powerful!
Thank you Anthony – Much appreciated – Cheers J
Oh my God that’s so sad!
Hugest hugs (cause I need one after reading that)
Sal xx
Thanks Sal – hw did you like the version in French? That was a tough ask to translate! Cheers J
I liked it a lot but i think it would be better if someone was reading it. I don’t speak French…haha I struggle with English most the time…and it would be lovely to hear the words rolling off the tongue.
Hugs
Sal xx
Beautiful!
Thank you Mira! Cheers J
This is can understand, haha ^^ It’s beautiful, J! 🙂
I prefer this version too 😉 – Cheers J