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The drink in her hand…
Her back against the wall…
He pins her so robustly…
Her defences quickly fall…
Her head feels so light…
Her world begins to spin…
Her legs turn to jelly…
As she breathes him in…
She knows it’s not right…
But doesn’t really care…
She wants him to touch her…
And undo her underwear…
Whilst taking her to places…
She has seldom been…
Where the Devil takes over…
And fills her soul with sin…
She needs him inside her…
Right here and right now…
She lets him have control…
But wants to show him how…
How much she wants him…
And how deeply she yearns…
To let out her bad side…
Show him what she’s learned…
As she’s no longer an angel …
Peeled off those goddamn wings…
Removed that fucking halo…
All the rules that it brings…
And in this sinful moment…
Without any form of regret…
She’s turned to the dark side…
And hasn’t finished yet…
As it’s a thrill she longs for…
An addiction she can’t beat…
In high heels and stockings…
Against the cold, hard concrete…
And with the drink in her hand…
She forgets for just one moment…
The nightmare of her reality…
And her ongoing inner torment…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
oh my.! That is just amazing. Your words are so vivid – I feel like I”m there.!!
Thank you Chirose – Am happy to provoke such a good reaction! Cheers J
Feel exactly like Chirose – strong, vivid words with enormous depth behind. Love this!
Thanks Rose – really appreciate your kind words – Cheers J
Wow J! This is amazing! So amazingly dark ^^ I love it! ❤
Thanks Iris – The stunning photo was the main muse! Cheers J
Sex as sin, loss of innocence, or caterpillar to butterfly? Dionysian behaviors aren’t all self destructive. Sex is one of the best ways I know to leave the world behind for a while and when we mate with love and respect we can come back to earth feeling better than when you left. I think many of our problems are based on locking doors that we told we mustn’t open.
Why do we want what we want and how can we get it without hurting self and others is the question we should be asking. Simple rules of wrong and right frequently lead to despair because they refuse to acknowledge the complexity of reality.
Great imagery!
And such an insightful comment Keith – thank you – and partly the reason why the land between right and wrong will always be desired! … Cheers J
Outstanding passion and “lost in the moment” description! Very well written. Moments like those are so memorable!
Thank you Ms’ Owl 🙂 – Cheers J
This is a fave of mine…love the pic (this little lady loves a bit of tartan but I’m sure I’ve told you that before lol), love the poem and I really love it when you get your filth on 😜 (even though you’ll say this is tame and not that filthy).
Hugs
Sal xx
Thanks Sal, you know you bring out the worst in me 😉 – but I find it hard to write filth without being cheesy, overly explicit or clichéd – maybe I need to find a new outlet in WordPress land for that side of me… Cheers J
Haha I bring out the worst in everyone J lol. The few bits of filth you have wrote haven’t been cheesy or clichéd…the overly explicit but maybe you do need to find a new outlet where you can be as explicit as you want without worrying about upsetting anyone…I wanna know if you do find that outlet 😉
Hugs
Sal xx
So dark and i love it!
Thank you Ethel! Cheers J
‘As she’s no longer an angel …
Peeled off those goddamn wings”
Feel like music. Good words led the reader to good places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing words.
Thanks again John – much appreciated! Cheers J
your words are like smooth river flowing, very clear and vivid
Very kind of you to say – thank you! Cheers J