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Relax and close your eyes,
now just listen to my voice…
I’m going to put you in a trance,
you don’t really have a choice…
I’m about to twist your mind and
control all your thoughts…
With some simple manipulation,
as there’s a lesson to be taught…
Because you crossed the line and
thought it wise to mess with me…
So this is now my chance,
to make your blind eyes see…
And feel the painful misery,
I think that you deserve…
Beginning with public humiliation,
because I hope that this will serve…
As a clear and stark warning,
to any of the others…
Who think that they are clever,
but soon will discover…
The power that I hold and
the immense energy I created…
Taking over your weak body,
showing how you underestimated…
The depths of my depravity and
the hatred deep within my soul…
That flows through my veins,
as I begin to take full control…
And you become my puppet,
A simple figure of fun…
But when this performance ends,
the real show will have just begun…
As I plant key words and actions,
deep inside your feeble mind…
And any trigger word spoken,
will simply serve to remind…
Of the day you crossed the line,
thought it funny to fuck with me…
And the day I took revenge,
inserting madness into your reality…
~
Eye Will Not Cry 
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish it were mine, for the mere fact that it could so easily be. ABSOLUTELY love it!!!!!!!
I love that you love this! Thanks for taking time to comment! Cheers J
My pleasure! Kimberly
Flying high except he end.
Flying high except he end.
Indeed! 😉 – Cheers J
🙂
Always a slippery slope seeking revenge instead of taking the higher ground, but beautifully written.
Too true, but I guess sometimes it has to be done..! Thanks for stopping by to comment! Cheers J
wow.!! I am speechless…..how utterly visceral.! This poem speaks to me on soooo many levels….just wow again. Beautifully written. kudos.
Thank you again for your kind words Chirose – I am happy you connected with this – Cheers J
Hi J,
I hope that you had a good Tuesday, and how very, very rude of me not to thank you for your kind words, I’m pleased that you enjoyed my silliness and the artwork is truly amazing. Thanks for noticing the art.
Now, I can direct my full attentions to you and your words. Again another winner, I don’t know how you manage to pull this off with every post. You can tell me your secrets, I promise I won’t tell. The opening lines are fabulous,
“Relax and close your eyes,
now just listen to my voice…”
The idea of hypnosis, again you are surprising! The next set of lines that totally grabbed me,
“The depths of my depravity and
the hatred deep within my soul…”
Then the conclusion,
“And the day I took revenge,
inserting madness into your reality…”
The words are so to the point, so good, and so satisfying. Thank you for another great read!
Have a wonderful evening,
Pepper
P.S. I had to edit out much of my comment as not to offend anyone.
You are welcome Pepper – not sure who you are worried about offending, so please release your burden and post what you feel – I don’t view my work through other peoples lens, so I appreciate peoples comments, the good, the bad and the times people may just want to say Fuck you – Not sure I have a secret, just a need for distraction. Cheers J
This is amazing, J! I love it 🙂
Thank you 😃😃😃 Cheers J
This one freaked me out J…big time lol
Hugs
Sal xx
Lol – are you under my spell yet 😉 – Cheers J
Yep have been for a while now 😉
Hugs
Sal xx