“When the moment comes alive”…

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The bath is poured and ready…
The scented candles are all lit…
She slides in her naked body…
Going to make the most of it…

She’s left the door off the latch…
And dropped him a subtle text…
Hoping his attention she did catch…
Fantasizing about what happens next…

But his phone is switched off…
He’s on a night out with the boys…
Yet she hears a muffled cough…
And the closing door makes a noise…

She’s no longer home alone…
And she thinks it is her man…
Drifting deep into her sexual zone…
She thinks it’s all going to plan…

Yet the man inside her house…
Is just a thief with a knife…
And as quiet as a mouse…
He rummages through her life…

Stealthily gliding up the stairs…
He hears her teasing mating call…
And he is taken unawares…
But understands she has to fall…

He enters the steamed up bathroom…
Sees her naked body in the tub…
It will become her watery tomb…
But not before she makes him feel good…

She screams out in pure terror…
But she’s in no position to resist…
He puts the blade upon her…
Before forcing her to kiss…

Then drags her out of the bath…
But slips and hits his head…
She disarms the psychopath…
Instinctively stabbing him till he’s dead…

The bath was poured and ready…
The scented candles perfumed the air…
Now her naked body is bloody…
And his eyes have a diamond like stare…

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17 responses to ““When the moment comes alive”…

  1. Oooohh, I like this one too! 🙂 A plot twist in a plot twist – very clever! You’re slowly but surely pulling me over to the dark side, J ^^ Keep up your wonderful work!

    • 2 versions – 2 endings – both dark – I like that, but appreciate its not everyones taste – there is little I write that is not twisted or distorted in some way – I can’t write happy stuff! Thanks for taking time to comment – Cheers J

  2. I’m still smiling! Oh my, this is fabulous, the ending has such an unexpected twist and the last two verses are so, so good. She’s my hero.

    “Then drags her out of the bath…
    But slips and hits his head…
    She disarms the psychopath…
    Instinctively stabbing him till he’s dead…

    The bath was poured and ready…
    The scented candles perfumed the air…
    Now her naked body is bloody…
    And his eyes have a diamond like stare…”

    Thank you and take care,
    Pepper

    • Thank you Pepper for your really kind words – I wrote this with 2 endings, both had merit, but in the previous post to this, she wasn’t so lucky 🙂 – glad you enjoyed! Cheers J

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