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We are cursed by time,
as we chase the sun…
In our constant battle,
to look and stay young…
Whilst life’s cruel joke,
recurs again and again…
And superficial Humans,
all want the same…
To hold onto our youth,
the eternal quest…
As it begins to wither,
despite all protests…
And a desperate need,
to feel so wanted…
Be desired, attractive and
not left disappointed…
Whilst life takes its toll and
time begins to ravage…
Each line and each wrinkle,
leaves us feeling so savage…
Because beauty within,
feels like it’s just a myth…
We never believed it and
soft skin we miss…
Paying good money,
in search of any cure…
Trying to turn back time,
whilst remaining so insecure…
Within a painful world,
that promotes the young…
Leaving the experienced,
wondering what we’ve done…
When it’s only Mother Nature,
holding her course…
Be it animal or Human,
be it man, woman or horse…
All are cursed yet,
only Humans chase the sun…
In our feeble battle,
to look and stay young…
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Cunsumerism.
Must be “Consumerism”, of course. 🙂
Maybe you were correct first time 😉 – Cheers J
Ts, ts, ts … 🙂
😀 Cheers J
🙂
Excellent commentary on our poor, miserable modern life! 🙂
Thank you Jonathan – and for the reblog – much appreciated – Cheers J
ORT-ORT!
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SUPERBLY DONE…READ WITH FEELING!!!!
Very powerful message! Well done, J 😉
Thank you – not sure about the power, but there is a message there somewhere – back to death and murder soon! Cheers J
Haha, can’t wait! I’m about to post a new poem right now. Just wait for it 😉
Am over to peruse soon!!! Cheers J
It’s up ^^
love the message, superbly written. ((awhoooo))
Thank you Marcus – your kind words are truly appreciated! Cheers J
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I wish more people would see this. I have promised myself thatvI will stay true to myself, and grow old gracefully.I just hope the man I end up with will appreciate that…LOL 😛
I am sure the man you end up with, will appreciate everything! Cheers J
Observations that ring true in a world obsessed with the superficial and new.
“Only Humans chase the sun…” I love that line.. smiles.
Thank you for your kind words Lila! Cheers J
Eye will not cry just made me weep. Good write up.
*hands you a tissue* – glad you connected and thanks for your kind words – Cheers J
This is great.
Thanks IngaHel – much appreciated – Cheers J