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Is he asleep…
Or is he awake…
Is this a dream…
And his reality fake…
Nothing makes sense…
His thoughts conflict…
Everything he’s touched…
Has just fallen to bits…
A mental disaster…
All of his making…
His head of confusion…
Leaves him stood shaking…
Afraid of his memories…
Regretting sinful desires…
He knows he’ll end up…
In Hell’s emotional fires…
On a one way ticket…
There will be no return…
He will be consumed…
Aware his soul will burn…
He doesn’t know when…
And he doesn’t know where…
So he stumbles through life…
Blinded by his despair…
As he’s stuck in a moment…
One fragment of time…
Replayed over and over…
But he can never rewind…
He can’t repair the damage…
Or pretend it’s not real…
All that’s been done…
Time just refuses to heal…
The hand that grabbed her…
By her slender throat…
Till her lifeless body…
Began to silently float…
Now she’s asleep…
And will never awake…
Her never ending dream…
His one big mistake…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
Very dark yet lovely as well
Thank you for your kind words Caroline! Cheers J
A stunning master piece. Wonderful. HATFM (((Awhoooo)))
Such a compliment from a writer such as yourself Marcus – you humble me – Cheers J
Responsibilities betrayed.
Betrayed and Broken… Cheers J
Cheers!
Beautiful in every sense of the word
Thank you for taking the time to comment with such kind words – Cheers J
Love this, great poem, well done.
I love that you love this – thanks for stopping by! Cheers J
Dark and beautiful…
Thank you for your kind words Florence – Cheers J
Pretty big mistake indeed… ^^” Wonderful poem, J! 😉
Why thank you and yeah, big mistake indeed! Cheers J
Wow J this one has blown me away! Bloody fabulous!
Hugs
Sal xx
Thanks Sal – glad you enjoyed! Cheers J
Beautiful, you are a wonderful writer.