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The girl in the window…
Strips off gradually…
Slowly revealing herself…
So nonchalant, yet seductively…
She knows you are watching…
But just loves the thrill…
Of showing off her body…
That others would simply kill…
To have one such as hers…
So easy on the eye…
As she reveals her charms…
To any random passersby…
Driven by her need…
To feel wanted and desired…
It comes from deep within…
Because in real life she’s tired…
Sick of being overlooked…
And not looked at twice….
It wasn’t like this to begin with…
She was always treated so nice…
But time always takes its toll…
And bedroom sparks die out…
Now she looks for excitement…
Trying to remove the doubt…
That sits inside her head…
And tells her she’s unwanted…
By those who sit around her…
Taking her for granted…
And unwittingly fuelling…
The way she sees herself…
Making her feel worthless…
And left high upon life’s shelf…
But stood in that window…
Her soul is on fucking fire…
Floating in a fantasy land…
Feeling wanted and desired…
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It’s daunting how much I can relate. Fantastically written!
Thank you Rose – Nice new profile photo too! Cheers J
You know I adore your poetry 🙂 And thanks, thought it was time for a change.
You humble me with your kind words – always good to change things, good choice! Cheers J
Wow…. Such deep messages in this piece. Excellent!
Thank you for your kind words, glad you connected – Cheers J
Speaks so well of what so many feel in their every day lives, in a world that can’t stop even for a second to say hi, Awesome post 🙂
Thanks Andy – you sum it up so well! Cheers J
So profound, that I could actually relate to it. Love this!
Thank you for stopping by with such kind words – Glad you connected with this – Cheers J
Reblogged this on Aubade.
J, can you please stop reading my mind lol. Seriously though this I understand so much that as I read the words on the screen the tears started falling.
Kinda hugging you but more hugging myself
Sal xx
Thanks Sal, my writing would clearly be so much easier if you were my muse 😉 – *passes tissue* and thanks for the hugs – you know I like! Cheers J
Haha I’m available for muse duties anytime you need me 😉 thank for the tissue and I know you like so here’s some more *hugs* sent especially for you J
Hugs
Sal xx
Now you’re spoiling me on a Friday night! People will talk…. ! Cheers J
LMFAO! People talk all the time I choose to ignore those that don’t know what they are talking about 😉
Hugs
Sal xx
This is suoerb writing. I love it.;)
Thank you for taking the time to comment – Cheers J
Just WOW!
I nearly made her jump…. I am going soft 😉 – Cheers J
Oh you softy ^^ You’re a bad liar 😉