~
She loves me, she loves me not…
But she loved him and never forgot…
She loves me, she tells me so…
But loved him and couldn’t let him go…
She loves me, I’m sure of it…
But loved him, every little bit…
She loves me, it’s in her kiss…
But loved him, he made her heart beat miss…
She loves me and my funny little ways…
But loved him for fantasy fucking days…
She loves me, but likes to tease…
But she loved him and did anything to please…
She loves me, isn’t that enough…
But loved him, even when he got rough…
She loves me, she belongs with me…
But loved him, even when chained to his jealousy…
She loves me and promised to be mine…
But loved him, thought about him all the time…
She loves me, till death do we part…
But she loved him more, he owned her heart…
She loves me, but she lied so much…
But loved him and still missed his touch…
She loves me, but this was driving me mad…
Because she loved him and it’s making her sad…
She loves me and I’ve taken all I can…
She loved him so much, but he was no family man…
She loves me, but I had to let her go…
She loved him and he doesn’t want to know…
She loves me, she loves me not…
Now she’s alone and deserved what she got…
~
Eye Will Not Cry 
Love the contrasts in this beautiful poem!
Why thank you – the song does the hard work I think – but I liked the push and pull – Cheers J
Agreeing with Justme’s comment above. The contrast is captivating and dramatic. Ending is spot on!
Thanks Rose – I had to stop myself killing her off 😉 – Cheers J
Like a nursery rhyme gone wrong!
Some would say you have summed elements of life up perfectly there Marissa! Thanks for stopping by to comment – Cheers J
Awwww c’mon J…did she really deserve it? 😦 Just kidding…but I absolutely love the contrast. It’s almost as if the girl loves one person….but loves one “personality” over another “personality”…..is that what you were going for? If not, completely disregard my comment. LOL!
Maybe – sometimes things just flow and there is no underlying reason – I just liked the idea of twisting this rhyme initially 😉 – Cheers J
I’m in flipping tears now! Bloody hell J this is fabulously heartbreaking.
Hugs (cause I need them now)
Sal xx
I need to figure out how to make you cry everytime me thinks – Cheers J
Hahaha! You just want the hugs 😉
Hugs
Sal xx