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FINE …
One word …
Four letters …
Let’s pretend …
That nothing matters …
Nothing is wrong …
No words spoken …
When deep inside …
Everything is broken …
Won’t tell a soul …
Can’t let them see …
So all is FINE …
And good with me …
Say the word …
And nobody asks …
Not scratching the surface …
Just walking on past …
Moving on to the next …
Leaving me alone …
They dodge a bullet …
Whilst I stifle my moan …
Covering the truth …
There’s no other way …
What if I told you …
What would you say …
If I opened up …
What could you do …
It’s not your problem …
These are my issues …
Seen through my eyes …
And my perspective …
What do you care …
It’s all so subjective …
My mountain ranges …
Are your mole hills …
My fears, my doubts …
You’d handle with skill …
So it’s not important …
No need to vent …
I’ll keep it inside …
And that will prevent …
You needing to invest …
Any more of your time …
Because it doesn’t matter …
Honestly, I’m F.I.N.E …
Fucked up…
Insecure…
Neurotic…
Emotional…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
I love this….x
Thank you Alice – sorry for the late reply -catching up on comments! Cheers J
Oh Fine, such a small word that hides so much and I’m afraid one that I have used quite often. Beautiful piece J
Sal xx
Haven’t we all! Cheers J
Definitely…hugs Sal xx
Amazing, this is simply, truly amazing.
Thanks Finn – nice to see you again! Cheers J
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Ah those passers by that won’t meet our eye, tuck their head and look to the other side. It’s so fun to be fine. Just change your wordings of courteous pleasantries on passing and maybe you’ll find someone just as fine when they raise an eye and reply, “Yes it is divine to be so F.I.N.E. Have a seat. I have an ear and am not restrained by time.”
(Tipping Hat)
“The pleasure was divine. Thank you.”
Ruhig
Amazing and poignant words Ruhig – thanks for stopping by and apologies for the late response – Cheers J
This is fine writing. Really. Tank you for sharing.
Thank you for stopping by with such kind words – glad you enjoyed! Cheers J
this is truly amazing.. i can relate to this in so many ways.. wow.
Thanks for your kind words Alma – so glad you connected with this, hope you find others in my blog of interest – Cheers J
I have. You truly have a talent!
You humble me – thank you! Cheers J
I remember this one… Is that possible? Still love it ^^
Hey – welcome back! Seen all your comments and smiled – really appreciate your words – yeah – sone reworks until this new home gets established – slowly getting there – Cheers J