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She wants more than his words…
Not just the things he writes…
She wants him with her every day…
And wants to hold him every night…
She wants to bite his lip…
As she’s bored of being his muse…
In world that’s only make believe…
Designed simply to confuse…
Because she has an aching need…
That comes from deep within…
Where she’s desperate for his fingers…
To gently explore her skin…
She needs to feel his naked body…
And hold him so damn close…
Be more than just his fantasy…
Haunted by his fucking ghosts…
That leave her sadly standing…
Crying and so very much alone…
And feeling so much colder…
Even in her own sweet home…
Where she sits and wonders…
What else she could ever do…
To convince him to love her…
And make her dreams come true…
To break all of the rules…
Help her escape from reality…
Which has her locked in chains…
And fucks with her sanity…
Keeping her a prisoner of life…
Only free within her dreams…
Where he is making love to her…
Giving her such orgasmic screams…
Before slipping into a deep slumber…
Safe inside his loving arms…
That wrap around her naked body…
And keep her safe from harm…
As she’s sick of reading words…
Now hates the things he writes…
That once held her captivated…
But now haunt her every night…
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Song requested by Linda – check out her blog here: http://loveworksofheart.wordpress.com –
Eye Will Not Cry 
Oh Fuck! #ThatIsAll
S xx
Hmm – you may have to expand 😀 Cheers J
It’s good J, too good… So good it’s painful to read and that’s all I’m saying lol
S xx
Then say no more 😉 – many thanks! Cheers J
Most welcome J. You know I think you’re a ⭐️and this poem proves it
S xx
Wow! I can relate! Writing is a lonely world, especially for the partner. I have played both roles. Bravo! Well said!
Thanks Tricia – a tough one to write but a great song for inspiration – Cheers J
Reblogged this on Grey Matters Tales of a Proper Villain and commented:
Is this her inner turmoil…
It may well be! – thank you for Reblogging and taking the time to read! Cheers J
Wonderful, brilliant!
Thank you for your kind comment and reblogging my work! Cheers J
Reblogged this on The Migraine Chronicles and commented:
A brilliant writing and understanding of how it so often feels.
Reblogged this on THE PAST can BITE me and commented:
I cried buckets and as i read each of these posts it was like you were describing me and my journey. absolutely breathtaking writing. thank you
Thank you for reblogging my work – Happy that you have connected with this one – your words humble me – much appreciated and I hope you find other rambles of interest within my pages. Cheers J
I find this very interesting – I can understand it from both points of view, but I have never experienced it.
Thank you for taking the time to comment, I hope you find other rambles of interest within my pages! Cheers J
This is brilliant beyond words. I’ve lived and breathed this. You’ve captured it perfectly!
Thank you Karin, I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Perhaps the song does most of the hard work – this was a poem written by me, but the song was a request – Cheers J
You realise this is mighty awesome?
Why thank you Ms Owl, you know me, it’s just another ramble, but the stats have gone crazy – this is how you must feel every time you post 😉 – you never did drop me that email – hoping that you are still OK (ish) Cheers J
(tips hat) Words would fail any compliment I could offer you.
Really kind of you to stop by and comment – thank you – really appreciated – Cheers J
No, the thanks goes to you for the momentary euphoria.
wow……I rarely encounter music that speaks to me anymore….thank you for this lovely encounter
Such an amazing compliment – thank you too and hope to see you again sometime – Cheers J
I very mich enjoyed this
Thank you Yolanda, really appreciate you taking the time to comment – Cheers J
Whoah!!
Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.
Fuck!!!
Now, I must be lost.
Thank you. ❤
Audra – thank you for your kind words – welcome to my blog and rambles, if your are lost, feel free to stay a while and hopefully find other things to enjoy – Cheers J
So sad and yet so beautiful…
Amazing poem.!! Amazing blog.!! Thank you for the follow too 🙂
Thank you for such kind words – welcome aboard! Cheers J
Absolutely beautiful. This gave me chills xx
Thank you Carley, glad you connected with this – Cheers J
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Reblogged this on foreplay copy cat and commented:
just brilliant, thanks for sharing
cheers BJ
Thank you for the kind words and re:blog – Cheers J
<——— nods, yeah I like that!
Thank you – Cheers J