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Sometimes he’s left to question…
Is he alive or is he dead…
Because no one seems to listen…
Or understand a single word he said…
No one seems to notice…
Does anyone even care…
As the anger inside him boils away…
This ignorant world should beware…
Because the rage inside is building…
The colour Red is all he sees…
He’s trembling with pure anger…
He’s going to bring them to their knees…
He will force them all listen…
He’s got a lot to fucking say…
And like a nuclear explosion…
Innocent people may have to pay…
He needs to make a statement…
Knows actions speak louder than words…
He’ll pour petrol on the burning fire…
And kill all the high flying birds…
In his mind he’s always scheming…
How to implement his plan…
In his head it all makes perfect sense…
That’s where this all began…
He has the story written…
Each chapter eased his pain…
His words described the ending…
The battle scarred hero left insane…
It’s going to be his masterpiece…
His legacy on this cold Earth…
That will teach the bastards…
And prove his soul has worth…
But for now he’s left to question…
How the knife got in his hand…
Why blood is pouring from his wrists…
They’ll listen now, but they’ll never understand…
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Eye Will Not Cry 
Very Beautiful!!! Loved it
Very kind and thank you for taking the time to say so. I hope you find more of my work of interest – Cheers J
Yeah m stalking your blog right niw and loving every corner of it 🙂
Haha – stalk away, you are more than welcome here 🙂 – Cheers J
Hell J, this one scared me half to death at first and then left me balling my eyes out…you my friend are wonderful (just saying)
S xx
It was a really difficult one to write – so many reasons, but happy how it ended up! Glad you like and you are wonderful too (Just saying!) Cheers J
It’s a truly fab piece hun and you most defo should be happy with how it ended up, I love it… And awwww thank you J you are too kind
Hugs
S xx
Or even bawling (stupid autocorrect) 😃
Wow. I’m speechless. Excellent work and an awesome track to accompany it.
Thanks again Laurie – plenty more words and music within my pages, hope you find others that resonate! Cheers J
I’ve only recently started to add music to my poems. You liked one of my poems, and i was led to your page. I think the 1973 caught my eye. =) I’d never thought to regularly include music in my posts. I tried writing off a song last night for the first time. Not sure if i like how it came out. https://silkypoeticlotion.wordpress.com/2014/04/20/who-do-you-think-you-are-30in30-make30-poetry/ I followed your blog and look forward to reading what you have to say.
Thanks, I have just read and commented – followed you also – if you read my “Whats it all about” page, you will see my inspiration comes (mainly) from the songs I use – I try to make the reader have an interesting visit with words, pictures and sound – I think it works (sometimes at least!) – Cheers J
It’s brilliant, really. I will be reading more of your stuff. Thanks!
Really kind – thank you – don’t be a stranger! Cheers J